Formative assessment

I got a formative assessment of my studio project today. Unfortunately, it is singularly lacking in quotable comments (i.e. snark). Instead it has some useful suggestions that are suprisingly close to what I've been thinking – about the use of text in the paintings. I'd been thinking, given the time left, that I'd do some without it.

However, I am after all morally obliged to do the opposite of what my assessor suggests, so I'll do a purely text-based work first.